Silvertip
Junior Apprentice
Silvertip ♥
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Post by Silvertip on Sept 10, 2007 20:44:08 GMT -5
Cat's Name: Jamie
Gender: She-Cat
Age: 25 moons
Rank: N/A
Clan: Kittypet
Personality: Adventurous and spunky, she longs to be a part of the forest. She hates the fact that she was born a kitty-pet, and doesn't even quite believe that she's of the same family, let alone species, of the other cats that she lives with.
Appearance: A white cat with medium length hair and amber eyes. She has a birth-mark of a crescent moon on her left paw, and she also has a scratch along her stomach from a scuffle as a kit.
History: Jamie grew up as a kitty-pet, and it was fine when she was little, but now she has had enough. The kitty-pet way just isn't for her. She has lots of friends around the neighborhood, but it just isn't satisfying enough knowing that another exciting world lies just beyond her backyard, and she can't explore it. She spends most of her days gazing longingly into the forest.
Example of Roleplay: Jamie was curled up on her fence staring out into the forest when she sensed movement. She tensed; no one usually came this far into Two-leg territory. She let out a sigh of relief. It was just a mouse. Maybe... She leaped down from the fence she was sitting on and crouched down as she had once seen the clan cats do. She leaped, and her claws connected to bone. She took a bite. Mmmm, this is so much better then that puff they feed me at home!
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Post by ♥Goldenheart♥ on Sept 17, 2007 18:14:55 GMT -5
You've got it almost perfect there, but I think the appearance needs to be longer. There's a bunch of places where you can get a bio finished now. If you can't think of anything more to say about what she looks like, check out one of those.
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Post by ♥Goldenheart♥ on Sept 20, 2007 21:13:49 GMT -5
There. Now that you've reached the minimums, it's accepted.
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