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Post by Fernstorm on Sept 8, 2007 4:30:14 GMT -5
Cat's Name: Fogpaw Gender: Tom Age: 11 moons Rank: Apprentice Clan: Darnessclan Personality: Very curios cat and is very adventourous. He likes tracking cats outside. He gets into a lot of trouble and he is a handful. Appearance: A white tom with an orange tabby outline of his head with a an orange tail tip. He has black claws and has extremely large eyes that are colored a grey-green. History: Fogpaw was a pure DarknessClan cat but his mother died giving birth and he never had a father because he went missing after his mother was pregnant. He was nursed by another queen and grew up with her kits. When he was a kit he got an extreme illness called, Greencough. Luckily he lived and he has never gotten sick sense then. Example of Roleplay: Fogpaw raced passed the swamp with a plump vole caught in his mouth. He wanted to show the whole clan his first catch as an apprentice even though he caught 3 mice when he was an kit. As he bounded into the clearing he stood in the center with his tail placed neatly over his frontpaws as he stood up straight. . Other: Can Forgottenmist be my mentor or Laurelstar please?
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Post by Barktail on Sept 8, 2007 4:38:14 GMT -5
Um, you have to fix the powerplay in the rp section and no chat speak so insdead of the r say or
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Post by Barktail on Sept 8, 2007 4:41:27 GMT -5
Much better. Accepted ;D
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