jhaub1
Junior Apprentice
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Post by jhaub1 on Jan 9, 2008 15:52:26 GMT -5
Cat's Name: Amberfur Rank: Warrior Age: 20 moons Gender: Tom Clan: RiverClan Personality: Amberfur is a sweet and gentle cat. He makes friends easily. He is also one of the most loyal cats you would meet. He would do anything for his clan. Appearance: Pelt is a light brown with dark brown spots. He has a very long slender tail and bright amber eyes. History: Was born in riverclan shortly after his father died in battel. He had no other litter mates that survived and has always felt alone. Example of Roleplay: Amberfur slowly padded out of his den and looked around. No one else had woken up yet and the sun was just about to peek over the horizon. As he slipped out of camp he let out a sigh of releif. He was finally alone with his thoughts. He walked over towards the bank of the river and layed down. As he peered into the pool of water in frount of him, he saw his reflection and something else. He pricked his ears and turned around quietly. A small she-cat had padded up behind him.... Other: ooc: sry, i didn't know someone else had that name
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Post by ♥Goldenheart♥ on Jan 9, 2008 16:10:38 GMT -5
There is exactly one problem with this bio:
I wouldn't recommend having two cats with the exact same name on the same site. If you just change the suffix (you could even call him Amberfur) it'll be okay.
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Post by ♥Goldenheart♥ on Jan 9, 2008 19:30:20 GMT -5
Wow, you've used very few words, but I can see the entire character from just what you've said! You seem to have mastered the art of concise completeness.
Accepted.
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