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Post by sparklepond on Dec 2, 2007 16:31:41 GMT -5
Cat's Name: Sparklepond Rank: Warrior Age: 63 moons Gender: She-cat Clan: RiverClan Personality: She is a loyal and trustworthy warrior to her clan. She is iesty and can snip if annoyed our panicked. She is has a brave heart and soul and loves to be around peace and water. Strong-Minded Appearance: She is a beautiful sleek long-haired she-cat. She is silver-grey and has an almost sparkle to her fur. She has long whiskers and beautiful aqua eyes. She is one of the most beautiful cats in the clans. History: She was clanborn and has been loyal ever since she was outside the nursery. When she was a kit she had started helping around inside the camp (though trying to avoid cleaning ticks from the elders) from when she was about 4 months old. She was a reat apprentice and was very eager to learn. She is a better hunter even though she is fast during battle. She enjoyed playing with the kits as well. When she was made a warrior early it wasn't a suprise because she was a hardworker. She soon took on the responsibilites of asenior warrior. Example of Roleplay: Sparklepond sat queitly next to the river with her eyes closed and listened to the gentl swivel of the water next to her feet. She tilted her head back and listened to the silence. She suddely heard a pitifull meow coming from across the river. She jerked her eyes open and saw the limp body of a kit laying on the bank! Other:
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Post by ♥Goldenheart♥ on Dec 3, 2007 17:37:24 GMT -5
This is a nice, passable bio. It could be a little better, especially given the typos, but overall it's good. Accepted.
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