Greyheart

[Fernstorm]

Cat's Name: Greyheart

Gender: she-Cat

Age: 26 moons

Rank: Warrior/Queen

Clan: Riverclan

Personality: Gentle natured and lovable. If insulted can turn into a spitting furball. She is loyal and trustworthy and in bad situations she always gets hep. (unless in a battle.)

Appearance:grey longhaired she-cat with some white and black stripes. Has white curved nails and Greyish green eyes.






History: Born into Riverclan and has a mother and father that have just died because of elder and has a no siblings. is loyal and trustworthy just like her father.

Example of Roleplay: Greyheart sniffed the border and found no trace of another clan. She went over to a patch of small reeds and renued her scent marker. She caught up with the rest of the patrol and strolled back to camp.

Other: Is a great swimmer and I really would like her to be accepted into Riverclan because I want to know how there camp is doing.

[Crystal.Light]

I'm not so sure. You'll have to ask Goldenpaw.

[♥Goldenheart♥]

It's okay, but it could use a little more detail in the personality department. Try adding a couple details of how she would act in given situations. Oh, and the "is loyal and trustworthy" part you've got in the History should really go in Personality.

[♥Goldenheart♥]

Okay. That's better, and just enough to go over my minimums.

Accepted.